Father To A Son. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Father To A Son.

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these tears of joy,
are for the first time that i saw you
my beatiful baby boy,
i never thought this love i would find,
for what i feel for you is so deep inside,
when i see your face i see mine,
when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine,
no matter how hard times may get,
just remember that im here for you dont ever forget,
for you are my hart my strenght my all,
when ever you need me just give me a call,
for i will always be here for you until the end,
because im more than just a father im also your friend.



Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

dedicated to my son: nicholas anthony murguia i love u always!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like it. It has a great scheme and I love how the father feels towards his son, it's very heartfelt. You should make it longer I think you have a winning poem on your hands if you add to it a little more. Other then that your a great poet I love It! ! ! !

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Christina Phan 19 August 2009

great title and ur son is proud to have dad like you 10++ Wonderful job

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syaz wafea 25 August 2009

it is so meaningful..i bet this is how every father in the world feels..ur son is lucky to have u~

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DELETED NOW 02 March 2009

omigosh! my daddy is always saying that... yea that's right I teared up I like this line... when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine

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No Noo 01 February 2009

good poem it rhymes

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

A beautifully written poem about love for son.....thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

when ever you need me just give me a call, for i will always be here for you until the end, because im more than just a father im also your friend....this is how father should treat a child when attains the age of maturity.. lovley father and fatherly advice we must seek and adhere to.... fine 10 read mine...smiley...kids....son...papa do u know...papa you too(reference for your poem)

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Anand Madhukar 20 September 2009

You are surely going to be a dad of whom your son will be forever proud...

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Luwi Habte 19 September 2009

what alovely father nice piece, you son is lucky to have u, as i am cool man for a beutiful poem luwi

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Claude H Oliver Ii 09 September 2009

We find out who we really are when we see our reflection in someone we love deeply.

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