Last Letter To My Father. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Last Letter To My Father.

Rating: 4.0

dear lost father
im writting you this letter,
its me your son
the one you left in the stormy weather,
i know theres never enough time in a day,
because im 18 and you still cant remember
that it's my birthday,
i didn't want your money
i just wanted you to show some love,
but i guess its too expensive
because you cant even afford to give me a hug,
this is the last letter that ill ever write,
maybee someday you'll understand
what you did wasnt right,
and maybee by that time
my love for you wont have a light,
so father excuse me i mean sir
this is the last letter that i'll ever write.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

this poem is deep touching my heart.. Great..

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Kerrial Newham 11 February 2009

Join the club of dads walking out. good poem. nice structure.

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Rebecca Spooner 17 February 2009

wow. this is quite an amazing work. :)

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Sumpter Carter 18 February 2009

I like how much feeling and emotion you put into your poems, I'm not sure if this is truth or not but you could have fooled me.

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Alesha Garrett 22 February 2009

I wish i could write that 2 my mom. Also my father. You r doin great with ur poems.

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Debbie Bennett 09 April 2010

Wow I can feel your hurt in your poem, may you come to know the Love of a Heavenly Father that is found in Jesus Christ the Lord. God Bless You. John 3: 16- For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

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Spiritwind Wood 30 September 2009

this poem is awesome-i like every bit of it-it's a shame good poems come from pain-10++++

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Anand Madhukar 20 September 2009

Awrite that comes straight from the heart and goes straight to the heart.

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*wishing i was with him* 17 September 2009

this poem is great. i can visulize the pain it must have caused.

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Evaughn Gray 13 September 2009

this is a very beautiful poem that you have written here Jose. I truly enjoyed it. tres bien.! Hazel G.E

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