Let Me Be With My Conscience Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Let Me Be With My Conscience

Rating: 4.9

Let me listen and hear my conscience,
O! Vice, the wretched one.
Your clutches seem to be strong,
But verily with you is a loss.

Let me walk and stroll with my conscience,
O! Vice the Satanic.
Your tentacles seem to be sturdy,
But verily with you is a fall.

Let me sing and recite with my conscience,
O! Vice the evil.
Your jaws seem to be empowered,
But verily with you is a defeat.

Let me hop and dance with my conscience,
O! Vice the shameless.
Your claws seem to be robust,
But verily with you is a shame.

'23/12/2014 Vijaypur Karnataka India'

Monday, December 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
In my struggle to come out of bad habits I wrote this poem
Rajnish Manga 23 December 2014

In the face of so much negativity all around, one needs to have a firm conviction to counter these forces as shown in the poem which makes it extraordinary.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 December 2014

A self guidance but a message for others as well.............10

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2015

A good conscience is a continued celebration. A nice piece of poetry well penned with insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain blessed.

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Samkelo Dlamini 14 April 2015

well written and meaningful! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

Thoughtful write. If one could read inner conscience then, one can surely come out of any pains, any habits. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Souren Mondal 30 November 2015

A old saying has that we have both virtues and vices in us, but it is upto us to choose the virtues and ditch the vices. A very well written poem from you Abdulrazak. It shows how passionate you are about having the right conscience.. If only we had a world where people had some respect for humanity and a proper conscience we might have been saved from the horrors of war, murders, rape, destruction, and all such sick cruelty.. Simple yet thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing brother.10 points from me. Your simplicity is wonderful..

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 October 2015

My conscience is my God so let me be with it through, come good or bad life will have no sweat and no trouble so long as I cling to it........very well crafted.......10

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Kinyua Karanja 23 September 2015

A lyric and very educating, I like this.

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Melvina Germain 20 September 2015

One may be suffering inwardly but once they recognize such they will survive it...Excellent poem.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2015

So nice poem.. i credit with 10 In normal ways Let us think in different way Leave it totally in self control But respond to conscience call It may be wrong call too But be true That shall wake your inner urge And force later on to purge

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