Let's Grow Up Together Poem by Craig Moses Uche

Let's Grow Up Together

Rating: 4.5

Let's grow up together
Let's eat berries
And dream of fairies
Also, let's dance with them in the summer

Let's bathe in the rain
And play in mud
Let our feet be our only stud
As our love bears the stain

Let's cuddle on winter
Yes, let our heartbeat rise
And as our love dances on ice
We'd be it's tinter

Let the skies raise a hum
And let the breeze serve as cover
Beneath the embrace of our love's coffer
Yes, let's rest all through autumn

Till our love writes it's season
Let's steal all the time
Upon the sands of time
Let's abandon all reason

Let knowledge become a vagabond
And let him wander
Like a lost dreamer
Till we've struck our bond

And until our love has awoken to the sun
Let's grow up together

This poem is very imaginative and self explanatory
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 December 2021

This is what is required. I liked the flow, message of your poem.5*****

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Craig Moses 31 December 2021

Thanks so much Dr. Asim, so grateful.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

Thank you Dr. Asim_ Please do consider reading my other poem 'Brother in Arms'

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Chinedu Dike 29 December 2021

A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and stay blessed.......

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An interesting poem that depicts the many wonders of love. Very heartwarming.

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Abdulbarry Asuku 10 May 2022

This is awesome 🙌

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Beautiful poem. A poem of love, " our love's coffer", " Till our love writes it's season /Let's steal all the time"…. Wonderful expressions….5 stars, dear poet…thank you for sharing

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Kim Barney 25 January 2022

Oops, that's line 12. I think I said line 8. Or did I? On the old system, I could have gone to 'manage comments', deleted the comment if it was wrong, and posted a new one! Why can't we do that anymore?

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Craig Moses Uche 05 June 2023

I understand, the complexities sir. I really appreciate your point of view but in 'tinter' I had in mind to say we'd be it's 'color' meaning adding some brightness. Thank you sir

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Kim Barney 25 January 2022

Thank you for inviting me to read this poem. It has some nice rhymes, but parts are hard to understand. For example, in line 8, a tinter is a person who specializes in tints or dyes. I don't really see the connection. Maybe I didn't get enough sleep last night. Sorry.

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