Let's Grow Up Together Poem by Craig Moses Uche
Let's Grow Up Together
Let's grow up together
Let's eat berries
And dream of fairies
Also, let's dance with them in the summer
Let's bathe in the rain
And play in mud
Let our feet be our only stud
As our love bears the stain
Let's cuddle on winter
Yes, let our heartbeat rise
And as our love dances on ice
We'd be it's tinter
Let the skies raise a hum
And let the breeze serve as cover
Beneath the embrace of our love's coffer
Yes, let's rest all through autumn
Till our love writes it's season
Let's steal all the time
Upon the sands of time
Let's abandon all reason
Let knowledge become a vagabond
And let him wander
Like a lost dreamer
Till we've struck our bond
And until our love has awoken to the sun
Let's grow up together
A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and stay blessed.......
An interesting poem that depicts the many wonders of love. Very heartwarming.
Beautiful poem. A poem of love, " our love's coffer", " Till our love writes it's season /Let's steal all the time"…. Wonderful expressions….5 stars, dear poet…thank you for sharing
Oops, that's line 12. I think I said line 8. Or did I? On the old system, I could have gone to 'manage comments', deleted the comment if it was wrong, and posted a new one! Why can't we do that anymore?
I understand, the complexities sir. I really appreciate your point of view but in 'tinter' I had in mind to say we'd be it's 'color' meaning adding some brightness. Thank you sir
Thank you for inviting me to read this poem. It has some nice rhymes, but parts are hard to understand. For example, in line 8, a tinter is a person who specializes in tints or dyes. I don't really see the connection. Maybe I didn't get enough sleep last night. Sorry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/10/2024 4:36:55 PM # 1.0.0
This is what is required. I liked the flow, message of your poem.5*****
Thanks so much Dr. Asim, so grateful.
Thank you Dr. Asim_ Please do consider reading my other poem 'Brother in Arms'