...Lies..... Poem by Eyan Desir

...Lies.....

Rating: 4.9


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Bullets in a Mouth
Dressed in white cloth
Shielding the blame
Polishing a sweet name
Germs of him that is dark
Leaks from mouths to Escape harm
A brush whiles he paints
A beautiful picture
In a ugly frame
The flower sweetening
Heart's dirty rags
Like knives pierce hearts
Pouring a stream of joy
When uncovered sour lives
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June 06/2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angel's lyre 13 June 2009

GOOOOD! ! ! not a poem but a truth. God bless..

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 13 June 2009

Love doctor you are proving daily that you are getting matured everyday...well penned the truth.

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Noha El3wdy 13 June 2009

thats very true great, keep up

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 June 2009

The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy.....................wonderful phrasing by words of truth, well penned,10++, thanks for sharing

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Kristina B; Williams 13 June 2009

i acxtually read this yesterday, but did not mind reading it again.you got my vote

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rago rago 07 July 2009

certainly lies speak the truth....... how is it possible to write about lies? unless the truth in you sprouts.........

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

yes indeed! ! ! ! lies can turn beautiful queens to dreaded serpents... liked this one eyen you said it well! ! ! 10+ with love shan

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A brush whiles he paints A beautiful picture In a ugly frame The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy When uncovered sour lives....beautiful write dear... balanced thought. it is how we live.... read mine' I am disgrace and no separate ways

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Pandian Angelina 19 June 2009

Righteous anger Heartfelt pain Lies when like Truth half dressed Strut about De-robing is not A crime - But As you say a joy! Emotions Beautifully potrayed, Pls read my 'Deception' when you have time. Not so fine as yours maybe, but, heartfelt still the same! Angel.

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Anjali Sinha 18 June 2009

i like the pun on these words 'a beautiful picture in an ugly frame' good write anjali

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