Life Is A Train To Arrive Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Life Is A Train To Arrive

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We travel visit and return,
Through journey we learn.
Beautiful moments does tell,
Time in mind rings new bell.

Life we live sure in this Earth,
Like wise it moves on in birth.
Birth after birth we all do face,
Only ambition is to run in race.

We think and move and see,
For each action is paid the fee.
Also reward we receive is right,
But our journey requires light.

Train travels on rail way tracks,
Life travels in sea of Earth backs.
Illusion goes back with emotion,
While we keep with God affection.

Life is specially gifted like train
We travel towards father in brain.
In meditation mind is train sure,
This carries us up making us pure.

Life is a train to arrive our father,
In journey we do not at all bother.
Eternal tracks keep this lovely train,
Infinite travel takes us in pure plane.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,21 March 2015. All rights reserved.

Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual,train
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...a beautiful metaphor...life is a journey by train ★ 21 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Just Arun xI like 21 Mar 2015 by Just Arun | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely lovely lovely poem xoxoxo tfs 21 Mar 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Michael Cardinal xexquisite metaphors. eternal tracks keep this lovely train from derailing. 21 Mar 2015 by Michael Cardinal | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery beautifully penned 22 Mar 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Facing life with our works! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 29 August 2017

A new perspective, loved it!

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Seema Chowdhury 10 October 2017

Lovely and accurate comparison, life is like a train waiting to arrive. Lovely theme

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Jose Baez 15 February 2018

Hi Kumarmani, I want to thank you for the comment you made on I did love you, gave me the opportunity to read many of your spiritual poetry, and I really enjoyed them, even though I write love poems, I also enjoy writing for Jehovah our Creator. Jose Baez

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Varsha M 11 September 2021

Contd....we travel we believe we move and make history.very encouraging. Thankyou.

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Varsha M 11 September 2021

Yes sir life is a train journey and destination is our destiny

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Life is a train - a journey in quest of the truth....excellent metaphor. Top marks dear Kumarmani ji

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Roxanne Dubarry 13 June 2020

Kumarmani Mahakul Is a Christian philosopher with a deep love of the natural world of his native India! His poems are truly delightful and a pleasure to read. He is an extremely talented younger poet and an asset to the poetic community. God will richly bless the fruits of his poetic labors of love!

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Marilyn Lott 20 May 2020

A beautiful poem of nature and life. Very calming to the spirit and enjoyable. I enjoyed it very much and also the sweet picture of nature as well.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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