Life's Rhythm! Poem by Siddartha Montik
Life's Rhythm!
Seems like I am in a brisk pace of risk!
not sure anytime I liked challenges,
for all my honest longings!
like I know not myself to put,
may be hardly have any clue of life yet!
surely so open for the life always,
never was with such surprising eyes!
looks like it is an eternal search,
as I never wanted to make a breach!
Sometimes I don't know what I am,
for, never have felt the life's realm!
still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme,
as I never cause any harm even in my dream!
for, I just watch the life and learn,
unlike many others may fetch it in a piece and turn-in!
So, I feel that I still have to learn,
...so that I might be with others in tune!
copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)
A lovely poem on and honest for it shows that life is a challenge, but you have accepted to live and deal with each and every one of those it brings your way. I am pleased by the fact that you are teaching us not to complain. Thanks for writing these two lined thoughts. I found it easier to read it because each stanza takes care of my questions.
still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme, as I never cause any harm even in my dream! - - -VERY NICE LINES
wonderful poem as the title shows. i loved to read your poem, dear sir!
Siddartha, , such a wonderful poem.....................
I did like it dear SM. Simple yet meaningful.. Flow and the thoughts have matched the pace..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 11:01:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I don't just like your poems Montik. I really love them.
Amen Aina Tumininu! I feel elated! !