Lull! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Lull!

Rating: 4.9


Its a clear lull now I feel,
even when I walk the mysteries of this beauty in all!

nothing else excites me in my feel,
nor nothing more brings me of any change of heal!

no whispers even I do hear,
but just the sound of my heart tear!

it is not so loud for my ears,
as my heart perched on 'a beauty' as much as she fears!

more this silence as it goes on and on,
wonder if it all, I can ever sustain!

but still it is a sweet lull I landed in,
seems I don't have to care for anything else but being in!

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

‘seems I don't have to care nothing else but being in! ’ …touching finishing rope…yeah stay stoic [you feel ‘sweet’ …here is your poetic mastery] apathetic are but ways of expression of inner suffering… Greater you interiorize better the poetic vision will be…clear...not turbid …lulled but not dulled you’re….lolol Thanks for sharing 10/10. Ms. Nivedita UK

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Chan Mongol 05 November 2016

The poem is a spiritual one with submission and humbleness. I love such poems. The poet has put his deep thoughts in his work. It is a well constructed, academic poem. ]]]].....it is not so loud for my ears, as my heart perched on 'a beauty' as much as she fears! ....., [[[[ We hardly hear such voices of sages as the poet brought up. Keep the good spirit up, poet! The highest rating for this masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 September 2018

no whispers even I do hear, but just the sound of my heart tear! Very touching, full marks Aniruddha Pathak

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Valsa George 05 August 2017

This pleasant lull, I am sure is the result of being in love with somebody or something! A lovely write radiating sweet contentment

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Lovely..in sweet lull forget all your tears Your are a great poet

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2016

but still it is a sweet lull I landed in, seems I don't have to care for anything else but being in! - - - - - - - - A lovely write- - - - brings a feeling of calmness.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2016

My heart tear! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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