Life's Rhythm! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Life's Rhythm!

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Seems like I am in a brisk pace of risk!

not sure anytime I liked challenges,
for all my honest longings!

like I know not myself to put,
may be hardly have any clue of life yet!

surely so open for the life always,
never was with such surprising eyes!

looks like it is an eternal search,
as I never wanted to make a breach!

Sometimes I don't know what I am,
for, never have felt the life's realm!

still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme,
as I never cause any harm even in my dream!

for, I just watch the life and learn,
unlike many others may fetch it in a piece and turn-in!

So, I feel that I still have to learn,
...so that I might be with others in tune!

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Monday, July 27, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aina Tumininu 24 November 2016

I don't just like your poems Montik. I really love them.

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Siddartha Montik 01 May 2017

Amen Aina Tumininu! I feel elated! !

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Ramesh Joshi 04 January 2017

Rightly said, we have to learn a lot from our advancing age

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Sarah Mkhonza 13 December 2016

A lovely poem on and honest for it shows that life is a challenge, but you have accepted to live and deal with each and every one of those it brings your way. I am pleased by the fact that you are teaching us not to complain. Thanks for writing these two lined thoughts. I found it easier to read it because each stanza takes care of my questions.

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Siddartha Montik 01 May 2017

Amen! ! Sir! !

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Naila Rais 25 January 2020

Learning continues till death. Life is a journey.10 NR

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Sankaran Ayya 15 September 2019

still I promise that I never felt any storm in extreme, as I never cause any harm even in my dream! - - -VERY NICE LINES

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 11 February 2019

wonderful poem as the title shows. i loved to read your poem, dear sir!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 September 2018

Siddartha, , such a wonderful poem.....................

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Abhaya Sharma 20 April 2018

I did like it dear SM. Simple yet meaningful.. Flow and the thoughts have matched the pace..

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