Trace Of Peace! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Trace Of Peace!

Rating: 4.8

We don't have to make a request for our peace,
and don't have to escape from the life's pace!

Peace may not have place to define in what we see..,
but it is in everything that we conceive and convince!

for, every situation has a reason to happen,
and many of us involved are in a want of peace in certain!

and still there is trace of peace in every situation,
if only our minds and hearts are so Open!

it all might make us to open the horizons of understanding,
till then we may not be in a situation of essimilating!

It may look like a big work of beginning,
but the fruits of the wait are a sure promising!

since we all know that peace has no noise,
the start also must lie in our silence!

Trace Of Peace!
Monday, August 24, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: peace,peaceful
Malabika Ray Choudhury 02 February 2018

Love the first and last two stanzas! How beautiful are the ideas - we don't have to make a request for our peace, and That peace has no noise. Keep writing Poet!

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Robert Murray Smith 17 July 2018

Idea good. Avoid exclamations. Last stanza best.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2018

Well penned my friend! many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 July 2018

Congrats! A poem with a great message.

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Tom Allport 17 July 2018

A wonderful peaceful poem that hopefully points the way? ......well penned Siddartha

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Ayan Mondal 12 February 2019

Beautiful thought.........10++++++++++

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Siddartha Montik 18 July 2018

Sadly.. how can I say about this? ? : (my this Poem was selected as POD only for line 'the start also must lie in our silence' which is a subtle warning too, telling me to stay Silent: (((So sad PH is also being used for Politics! !

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Kelly Kurt 17 July 2018

Until the last line, I was with you. Peace needs to be spoken, advocated. Not with violence or threats, but with words to inspire. Congrats, Siddhartha.

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Aqua Flower 17 July 2018

Having an open mind definitely brings peace! Nicely done and congratulations on POD! :)

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Oduma Alex 17 July 2018

beautifully written I love it

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