Light Night Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Light Night

Rating: 5.0


Green souls are seen in threads of night
Light!
Lights of souls here are glowing to write,
Cite!
You can see and measure real night's height,
Smite!
Who is going to see there night sky's kite?
Right?
Green souls have fallen from far sky's cloud,
Loud!
The dark road is perhaps in immense fright,
Bite!
Byte after byte is waved, you do not slight,
Alight!
Night street is humming towards us to ignite,
Polite!
Beauty of night with twinkling stars you invite,
Flight!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,08 November 2018. All rights reserved.

Light Night
Thursday, November 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lights,night,nightfall,souls
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,19 October 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2018

Kumarmani, such well crafted poem...................

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 November 2018

A vivid depiction of night light. A unique write well composed and portrayed.10

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Ravinder Soni 08 November 2018

What does a green soul imply, my brother; are you referring to some particular rawness? A good write.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 08 November 2018

Night with twinkling stars are beautiful and inviting.The sight enjoyable without lamps illuminated.Wonderfful write!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2018

(2) I cite another line: Green souls have fallen from far sky's cloud, Loud! Such loudest explosion we heard crystal clear, and then your last concluding line: Beauty of night with twinkling stars you invite, Flight! ..............................Indeed Beauty it IS, watching those twinkling stars you invite, Flight! Beauty of night and Beauty of Flight. See (3) please, thank you.

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Dogma Daniman 13 June 2020

Light is symbol of wisdom and night is for ignorance. We need light like wisdom to illuminate fife and feel God. This poem is nice.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2018

Beautifully breathtaking imagery, beautiful soul! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ And love the photo too! ..

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Valsa George 14 November 2018

You have captured the entire beauty of the night light, not in essence, but in sound! There is a free flow of words giving it a rare lyrical brilliance!

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2018

beautiful poem and poetic expression /// night - the numb conditions of light!

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2018

Indeed light night is the source of inspiration. Articulate poem from a master poet.100++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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