Green souls are seen in threads of night
Light!
Lights of souls here are glowing to write,
Cite!
You can see and measure real night's height,
Smite!
Who is going to see there night sky's kite?
Right?
Green souls have fallen from far sky's cloud,
Loud!
The dark road is perhaps in immense fright,
Bite!
Byte after byte is waved, you do not slight,
Alight!
Night street is humming towards us to ignite,
Polite!
Beauty of night with twinkling stars you invite,
Flight!
© Kumarmani Mahakul,08 November 2018. All rights reserved.
A vivid depiction of night light. A unique write well composed and portrayed.10
What does a green soul imply, my brother; are you referring to some particular rawness? A good write.
Night with twinkling stars are beautiful and inviting.The sight enjoyable without lamps illuminated.Wonderfful write!
(2) I cite another line: Green souls have fallen from far sky's cloud, Loud! Such loudest explosion we heard crystal clear, and then your last concluding line: Beauty of night with twinkling stars you invite, Flight! ..............................Indeed Beauty it IS, watching those twinkling stars you invite, Flight! Beauty of night and Beauty of Flight. See (3) please, thank you.
Light is symbol of wisdom and night is for ignorance. We need light like wisdom to illuminate fife and feel God. This poem is nice.
Beautifully breathtaking imagery, beautiful soul! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ And love the photo too! ..
You have captured the entire beauty of the night light, not in essence, but in sound! There is a free flow of words giving it a rare lyrical brilliance!
beautiful poem and poetic expression /// night - the numb conditions of light!
Indeed light night is the source of inspiration. Articulate poem from a master poet.100++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kumarmani, such well crafted poem...................