Prophets, David and Jonah
We all
Make mistakes
By mistake
Light up
Above the raging volcano
Of your thought
The conscience
Wake
(2009/3/17)
Thought provoking and tantalising. The economical style is really appealing.
What wonderful advice.Light was the first thing God spoke into existence. in time, it will overcome darkness.10, for your wise thoughts. Warmest regards, Sandra
this wonderful piece is so true. EVERYBODY makes mistakes by mistake as you said yourself..it was very good, short but really good. ~Hazel G.E
Light up Above the raging volcano Of your thought -------- that was really wonderful. i really love this part thats really great. thanks for letting me have this nice poem.10
Stong sentiments, Thought provoking..............................
a nice thought provoking verses with a touched of the great prophets...biblical point of view implied to reality.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A deep thought through simple and efficient words. A lovely poem! 10