The fox is running
A red fissure in the woods
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A wonderful second line! A wonderful tanka with a great depth of meaning!
I changed this line 5 or 6 times! I'm very happy that you liked it!
Beautiful poem so nicely executed. It is on love. Thanks for sharing.
Love is the reason why our world keeps spinning. Even a drop of it is enough. Thanks!
A beautiful poem that captures the power of attraction and love. Superbly penned.10+++
Kostas, such a wonderful tanka..............10+++++++++
Love is in the eyes, it's like looking deep into the soul. A lovely poem.
Running of fox with taken breath is definitely an amazing task to express love. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10
Down! ! Hitting my soul! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank you for your poetic comment Edward