Manonton Dalan

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Likable >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

an old man with a truck
goes around on summer day
to clean, cut your shrub
for a reasonable fee, cheap
I let him in to cut my grass
he even prune my tree; free
this summer he never came

trees get bigger; unruly
lawn is okay I manage to do
I am wondering where is he
he could have been sick
maybe move to other city
I hope he found a better job
for grandkids; he used to say

Topic(s) of this poem: patience, work


Comments about Likable >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/16/2016 2:33:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem, Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/6/2015 12:10:00 AM)


    Wondering in patience of emotion is very fantastically expressed in this wise poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/5/2015 7:32:00 AM)


    you have painted your feelings with beautiful poetic language, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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