Limerick- 72.When The Enemies Met Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- 72.When The Enemies Met

Rating: 5.0


Smart sprinter frog lived in the well
Merry mouse lived in the mill
Once they went for a ride
Both walking side by side
Came a cat and snake, making them yell

Monday, December 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 28 December 2015

Although it seems little funny, in real life we face situations of this nature. Who does what, is a matter of occasion. Nice write. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2016

i guess they were riding on a train and walking down the aisle. never know who you'll meet on a train! cute. bri :) dinner time! just in time! ! ! !

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Ernest Makuakua 28 December 2015

funny one beautiful piece too

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Akhtar Jawad 28 December 2015

Enjoyed this beautiful Limerick...................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 December 2015

Wonderful idea.An enjoyable poem I like most. Thanks for sharing....10

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Susan Williams 21 March 2020

I enjoy your limericks so much- your imagination is unconquerable! !

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Bri Edwards 29 June 2019

I LIKE the alliterations. were they riding and walking at the same time? i've done so on a plane, bus, and train. i could say more, but i'm " pressed for time" . bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 December 2018

Frog and the mouse, the snake and the cat. wonderful imagination dear professor valsa. thank u, i am still smiling.

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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2017

A well texted and nicely thought-out poem embellished in beautiful poetic rhyme. Thanks for sharing Prof and do remain blessed.

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2016

A friendly ride ends on a risky wicket but not before evoking a string of humorous situations. Amazing imagery. Thanks.

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