Now that he is an adolescent
Visited by dreams iridescent
He no more wants candy
But a little brandy
Without which he turns violent
Your limerick is so nice But then I am not surprise You always have a way Which I will find one day But I'll need your good advice thanks Valsa
A limerick for a limerick.... my friend How well your witty words blend I feel excited, Far more delighted, By what you have thoughtfully penned! Thanks a lot!
Lucky to have received a limerick for your limerick. Readers get the Bonus. Thanks.
Oh! Wonderful. Even without seeing the title, one would have guessed it right. Lovely limerick. Thanks a lot.
Wow....That's Fantastic Limerick. Child is growing in its own dreams, though addiction to anything is not good.
Addiction of anything makes a child insane, it's parent's responsibility to keep him at arms length from any addiction. A wonderful limerick with a great message.
Great limerick! In someways it represents today's culture so well. Every body is angry for not getting what they want. Instant gratification they want with out much effort. Thanks for sharing Valsa.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ha ha ha what a sign of growth in this modern world.Nice one Madam, Welcome back.10++++