Limerick-93. Inaction Poem by Valsa George

Limerick-93. Inaction

Rating: 4.9


He said, he couldn't spring into action
The doctor put him under traction
He found it cosy,
Being very lazy
For him, a good excuse for inaction

Limerick-93. Inaction
Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: laziness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 22 November 2016

Height o laziness.......

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Nosheen Irfan 20 November 2016

Awwww..that's so me. Always looking for an excuse to do nothing. Hahaha. I love this humorous piece. A10

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2016

Laziness! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Donna Vogler 21 November 2016

He found it cozy Situation rosey Nice one, Valsa

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Valsa George 22 November 2016

Thank you very much Donna for stopping by to read my poems!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 December 2022

lol i love it

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Akhtar Jawad 09 March 2018

I doubt that lazy man must have started flirting the nurse and the ward boy might have stolen his purse.

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2016

This is an outstanding limerick poem. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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Susan Williams 03 December 2016

This has a sweetness as well as a good sense of humor to it- in other words, a well-written limnerick

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Savita Tyagi 27 November 2016

Lol! Doctor's orders! Why bother! Thanks for sharing.

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