Limerick- A Bubble Burst Within Poem by Valsa George

That's a good one, Valsa - -10. Nice picture too. I just posted one myself.

Like rippling waves in a pond the communication was made very brilliantly with electric bond and eyes explored the beauty of perception of love and mutual understanding. You have trick-fully and beautifully presented this excellent Limerick poem....10

A poem of pure passion! The title and the picture is so apt to the text! It occurs to my mind that may be, you have sacrificed some more appropritae words at places for the sake of accuracy of syllables that are preconditions of a limerick.

Oh. my this is sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet and you handled your topic with such delicate lines. excellent excellent excellent! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++

Splendid piece. Thank u. anjandev roy.

Valsa, you’ve captured in this the spark, the magnetic charge, of infatuation that hopefully leads to something deeper and more permanent. -Glen

Valsa, dear Poetess, this is a classic Limerick! The accuracy of the syllables, the perfect rhythm of the verse and above all, the content of the poem. A passionate bubble, indeed, bursting from within. A picture so attractive and apt.......10