Valsa George


Limerick- Attraction - Poem by Valsa George

As he went for a long country stroll
he discerned losing his heart and soul
to a lovely lass,
cutting fodder grass
whom he badly wanted to cajole

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, infatuation , limerick


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Nine syllables each in 1,2 and 5 with five syllables in 3 and 4 lines

Comments about Limerick- Attraction by Valsa George

  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (3/18/2020 1:38:00 AM)

    I like the gentle humor in so many of your limericks- - and this one has an added touch of romance! ! ! 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/8/2020 7:50:00 AM)

    Well written Limerick. Humour as it is plus bit romance! 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (12/21/2019 4:28:00 PM)

    Attraction has great motivational power. The way you have presented this poem is heart winning. Visiting this gain I am very happy. This is of course a nice fun giving Limerick. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (12/13/2019 9:56:00 PM)

    Awesome and interesting. The picture that comes to mind after reading the makes it more enjoyable. Thanks Valsa ji. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (12/12/2019 1:19:00 AM)

    The natural human instinct precisely captured in this well-composed limerick! A similarity can be seen in birds as well: it is a spectacle of courtship! (Report)Reply

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  • Parameswaran Nair Ddamodaran Nair (12/11/2019 4:36:00 AM)

    Its just like an Indian story.... and at last he marries the lass. Thank you Valsa George. You have wonderfully created a cinema in just a limerick (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (12/6/2019 6:34:00 AM)

    and any one would if one could lovely lass ma'am (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (12/5/2019 9:49:00 AM)

    What happened next...? a natural happening in a nice interesting limerick form..and of course that lass is beautiful..
    thank you Valsa for this cute limerick
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (11/29/2019 3:02:00 AM)

    Lovely lass who is cutting fodder grass is understanding his coax. Nicely penned. Beautiful Limerick dear madam. Thanks for sharing with beautiful graphic. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (11/28/2019 10:44:00 PM)

    And then...
    we all are eager to know what happened.
    That lovely lass apart, your limerick is no less attractive.
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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (11/28/2019 4:20:00 PM)

    A brilliant Limerick dear madam! Thanks for sharing....10++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (11/28/2019 9:11:00 AM)

    Fantastic Limerick. Wonderful to read. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (11/28/2019 7:05:00 AM)

    Wonderful limerick! To my list (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 28, 2019



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