Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen

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My wife says I need my own den;
She's said it again and again,
For she's always bitchin'
I clutter the kitchen
With my laptop, my notebooks and pen!

Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen
Wednesday, December 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,poems,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True story.
written 30 December 2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 30 December 2015

I wouldn't dare submit a poem like that. I am using a desktop which I got new last year. It is in a den with some electronic equipment. My son likes to clutter that up.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2015

I'm getting more and more daring in my old age.

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Kelly Kurt 30 December 2015

She may have a point.: -)

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

Fantastic limerick, Mr Barney! Your wife may have a point though... that looks a little cluttered indeed : ) Thank you for sharing!

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2020

Fantastic write......thank u, dear poet.......anjandev roy.

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Wes Vogler 01 January 2016

Well crafted Kim. I am proud to have kicked some of you guys into gear doing limericks.

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Kim Barney 28 November 2025

Thanks, Wes. I miss you, old buddy!

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Valsa George 30 December 2015

This is a complaint most wives have against their husbands! Though my husband doesn't bring his lap top to the kitchen, he clutters my living room with news papers. Interesting limerick! Thank you for reading my poem The Blaming game! Happy New Year!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

With new technology life is filled with new essence. Very finely drafted and shared wonderful poem really.10

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Kim Barney 30 December 2015

Thank you very much, Kumarmani.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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