Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen

Rating: 5.0


My wife says I need my own den;
She's said it again and again,
For she's always bitchin'
I clutter the kitchen
With my laptop, my notebooks and pen!

Limerick: Cluttered Kitchen
Wednesday, December 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,poems,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True story.
written 30 December 2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 30 December 2015

I wouldn't dare submit a poem like that. I am using a desktop which I got new last year. It is in a den with some electronic equipment. My son likes to clutter that up.

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Kim Barney 30 December 2015

I'm getting more and more daring in my old age.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

With new technology life is filled with new essence. Very finely drafted and shared wonderful poem really.10

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Kim Barney 30 December 2015

Thank you very much, Kumarmani.

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Kim Barney 07 January 2026

Yes, Rob, ten years has changed a lot. When I wrote this, my wife and I were living in a small apartment in Brazil. Now we are back in our home in Kaysville, Utah, USA. My computer is usually in the TV room now, and only occasionally in the kitchen.

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Rob Lamberton 06 January 2026

Has 10 years changed anything?

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Isadora Quagmire 19 November 2025

Fantastic limerick, Mr Barney! Your wife may have a point though... that looks a little cluttered indeed : ) Thank you for sharing!

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2020

Fantastic write......thank u, dear poet.......anjandev roy.

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Wes Vogler 01 January 2016

Well crafted Kim. I am proud to have kicked some of you guys into gear doing limericks.

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Kim Barney 28 November 2025

Thanks, Wes. I miss you, old buddy!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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