Limerick- On Old Age Poem by Valsa George

An amazing Limerick dear madam...I love these kinds of poems....10

You are younger to PP ME but your limericks are like ice cream for me who can ever beat you poetess composing limericks limitless

A poignant write that depicts brilliantly and vividly the effects of old age; physically and emotionally. However, blessed are those who have reached old age for they have given more time to spend with their beloved family and to enjoy the wonders of existence. A beautiful poem on life so wonderfully crafted and conveyed in a unique limerick.10++

Brilliant Limerick......thank u. anjandev roy.

A sad reality of life that is articulated well in this piece. The rhythm in this one particular was more conspicuous and explicit compared to the others, at least in my perception. The effete tone, sans exuberance, pairs finely with the theme. This is structured with finesse as posited by your previous poesy

You have arrested it so well in Limerick form.

This sadness is so real.

valsa, on this theme but in a more humorous vein, if you haven't read my recent " my seventy-one-year-old self in a mirror, " you might enjoy it. -glen

I am drawn to this limerick probably because of its serious and heart-felt tone. This one goes on my fav list with a great big 10++++++

beautiful Limerick shared on old age death arrests the shining age time brings such a worried phrase none can stop chained fate's job have to leave keeping heir in maze