केले खाने का शौक बड़ा रखते थे मिस्टर केलकर,
दर्जन भर केले खाते थे जब भी आते खेल कर,
ये तो था जब मार के आते,
लेकिन जब वो हार के आते,
खुद को सजा दिया करते थे दंड बैठकें पेल कर.
Dear Rajnish ji, I am beginning to read your Limericks through this delightful one -R18. What does R stand for? Mr Kelkar eating dozens of 'Kelas' is really humorous. Excellent Limerick in Hindi. Rajnish ji, i shall soon catch up with all your Limericks. Meanwhile, here is a full score for this poem...10
It feels good when you get a great comment from a poet friend and that too after more than three years since the previous visit on this page.
This is an amazing review and a truly positive feedback. 'R' is the initial of Rajnish, otherwise, it has no significance. I am glad that you have kindly started reading my limerick poems. Thank you so much, Geeta ji, for your support and appreciation.
Enjoyed this beautiful funny poem..............................
Amusing expression. First two lines are most interesting. Thanks for sharing......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lol! Good one. Thanks for sharing.