Rajnish Manga

Gold Star - 170,229 Points (September 10,1951 / Meerut (UP) / Presently at Faridabad (Haryana) , India.)

Limerick R9 / Stop Writing Limericks/ Hindi - Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R9 / stop writing limericks/ Hindi

A limerick can be rather funny
when the syllables are on the money.

But when none of it fits
it can give you the shits

Would you stop writing limericks, sonny?

Original Writer: Herbert Nehrlich

हिंदी अनुवाद: रजनीश मंगा

लिमरिक भी हो सकता है इतना हास्य प्रधान,
चुनिन्दा शब्दों का मेल बना देता है इसे महान,

यदि शब्दों के युग्म मिलें न,
पाठक गण के ह्रदय खिले न,

लिमरिक लिखने से बेहतर है सोना लम्बी तान.

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Faridabad, Haryana, India

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry, writings

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick R9 / Stop Writing Limericks/ Hindi by Rajnish Manga

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/10/2016 2:11:00 PM)

    Very amazing Limerick shared where syllables are money. This makes very funny and pleasing with wisely expressed humor. Nice sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (6/2/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Just the word Limerick is warm and welcoming, so do not stop. Thank you for the laugh, from your pen..oops
    ... I wasn't expecting that....
    Thank you
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    Rajnish Manga (6/3/2015 11:20:00 PM)

    Thanks for leaving your lovely comments. I wish you could appreciate the translation as well.

  • Kelly Kurt (4/2/2015 3:23:00 PM)

    I agree. Thanks for sharing this, Rajnish. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/27/2015 1:11:00 AM)

    Ha... Ha..... great! Write more.... and do not stop! (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (3/27/2015 8:10:00 AM)

    Thanks for all the encouragement you have exhibited towards newcomers like me in the field of poetry.

  • (3/26/2015 2:01:00 PM)

    Funny one, made me smile. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/24/2015 11:38:00 AM)

    i love limericks and this one is so nice
    well done
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    Rajnish Manga (3/25/2015 4:37:00 AM)

    Thank you, Ellias, for leaving a lovely message about my Limerick R9.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 25, 2015

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