Limerick: The Race Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Limerick: The Race

Rating: 4.8


I thought I would enter a race
And dreamed how I might take first place
But I tripped on a stone
And my chances were blown
So I ended up red in the face

Limerick: The Race
Saturday, June 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,sports
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
04 Jun 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elisabeth Wingle 11 June 2016

I Really like this limerck, concise, clear and clever the three cs

2 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2016

I find limericks hard to write. But u did it so perfectly fantastic. Its gud to banter oneself than others always. Thumbs up. And thanx! !

2 0 Reply
Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

Aw, don't listen to Wes! A really good effort, Kim. He's just jealous. Tom Billsborough

2 0 Reply
Wes Vogler 06 June 2016

thank you sir for making this presentation Please don't call us we'll call you

2 0 Reply
Wes Vogler 11 June 2016

How about that I have gotten a couple of people to be protective. progress

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Close
Error Success