Little Bird Poem by Valerie Dohren

Little Bird

Rating: 4.8


The sweetest sound I ever heard
So issued from a tiny bird
That all the universe stood still
To listen to his joyful trill.

It seemed that all creation bowed
To see him on that bough, stood proud,
As there he sang a merry song
Enchanting all the morning long.

'Oh little bird with plumage bright
Be there forever in my sight' -
I prayed that he would always stay,
But from that bough... he flew away.

So then a vigil long I kept,
While me and all creation wept,
Until once more he graced the sky -
The world and me no more would cry.

Then out of nowhere came a bolt
That surely caused my breath to halt -
I heard a silence fall around,
Then saw him flutter... to the ground.

The world then grew a darker place
As all the stars burned out in space.
Alas, the little bird was dead -
Tears, I … and all creation … shed.

Friday, October 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kavya . 03 November 2014

ohh such a touchy poem, , , the initial paragraphs brought thrill about the tiny bird and its song but eventually it fluttering to the ground was indeed a gloomy end. Very well written Valerie......loved it

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Om Chawla 28 October 2014

A lovely poem and so very touching. The little bird represents the fragility of life as Diane Hine feels or is it representative of hope which dies and rekindles again and again.

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Hans Vr 24 October 2014

So beautiful, so touching. Things of beauty are not a joy forever. We have to enjoy them in the moment because the very next moment they may be gone for ever. Luckily our great Creator created so many things of beauty in the sky in the seas and here on earth, that the very next thing of supreme beauty is never far away from us.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 22 October 2014

Little bird is really wonder in creation of God. With plumage of brightness little bird teaches many more things. Very nice job and excellent poem shared in forum.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 August 2018

A beautiful poem indeed about the sweet bird that meets its end. Very well crafted and flow is amazing. Enjoyed.

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Valerie Dohren 28 August 2018

Thank you for reading and commenting. Pleased you enjoyed.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

Wow, what an amazing poem about separation and loss! The little bird enraptured my mind, gave me joy for the moment, and then as with all life it was gone - taken by death itself from your beautiful poem Touched my heart with a joyful sadness, then that too expired. Great poem! 10 - 10's if possible! RoseAnn

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Lyn Paul 03 December 2014

Dear Val... Beautiful words you have expressed. Thank you

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Swimming in the sea of separation and sadness yet souring above the stars of significance!

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Ramesh Rai 21 November 2014

It sounds much the apathy of creation.

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