Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ Poem by Prayad Brian Pantasri

Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ

Rating: 5.0


Hello! we've been trying to send you a wave
We have long been trapped in the cave
It's surrounding by the water
Indeed, over here is darker
Thank you so much for resecuring us to the safe.
(Brian P.)

ติดในถ้ำค่ำเช้าคอยคนช่วย
น้ำท่วมด้วยมืดมนทนท้องหิว
แต่ปลอดภัยชีวิตไม่ปลิดปลิว
สูงสุดลิ่วเหนือเกล้ากล่าวขอบคุณ
(3/7/2018)

Lives Trapped In The Cave: ชีวิตติดในถ้ำ
Wednesday, July 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,safe,security,wave
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo S Mbuyazi 09 July 2018

Congrats for chosen ain this category..nice write..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 July 2018

Thank you so much for securing us to the safe or is it really resecuring? .I don't get this, BUT thank you for sharing this poem as Member Poem Of The Day. The most important things is: the ones who have been saved already. Thank you for sharing this poem about a LIVE occurrence and this is still going on NOW! I have watched them on TV recently. A 10 for the vote.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 July 2018

It is a very unfortunate incident. It is a great relief that they are well and being rescued one by one. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 July 2018

Whatever the circumstances under which you all have to face this unfortunate event, its the heavenly duty of every human being to be with you all by heart and keep your spirits up until the last person gets out of this mess. We all wish you in the deepest heart every single one of you see the sun again as soon as possible. Thanks for the poem and congrats for being the member's PoD.

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Rini shibu 09 July 2018

Congratulations for poem of the day..well deserved and on right time

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

A witty rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Prayad.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 July 2018

God works in mysterious ways. This prayerful poem is a gentle reminder. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2018

A wonderful poem, I congratulate you.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2018

A poem on an accident and rescue efforts, well in time, a well deserved selection as member's poem.

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Lyn Paul 09 July 2018

A miracle it is. 8 now rescued, not forgetting the rescuer who lost his life. The world is watching.

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