Longing For A Cool Breeze Poem by Savita Tyagi

Longing For A Cool Breeze

Rating: 5.0


No sun and no air
Just sweltering humidity
Like an unwanted thought
Troubling mind and body
And you- like an caged bird
Fluttering to escape
The heat, the sweat, the discomfort
The sleepless night.....
Trying to push it with all your might
But failing to do so......
Longing for a cool breeze....

Friday, August 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 30 August 2016

Our last summer has been so terrible...... unprecedentedly humid and sweltering......! We felt exactly like this!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2016

A Beautiful write on summers discomfort, yes we do long to feel cool breeze especially in the midst of heat and humidity. Loved reading it.

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Savita Tyagi 21 August 2016

Thank you Geeta for your comment.

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Annette Aitken 14 August 2016

A lovely discriptive write, you can feel the discomfort of he heat as you read along, very good write. Annette

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Savita Tyagi 15 August 2016

Thank you Annette. Appreciate your reading the poem.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 August 2016

The heat, sweat and discomfort alongwith sleepless night rewarded during summer in a city like Mumbai, located on a sea shore, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Savita Tyagi 15 August 2016

Thank you Ratnakar for your comment. Not from Mumbai but from U.P. I remember those hot and muggy days very well.

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