cherassery damodaran binish

Love - Poem by cherassery damodaran binish

Somebody told it was the color
Of her dress attracted him first
Then her looks, as the gist
Of the innocence and the valor

But it was for me, her eyes
That revealed the truth of passion
And as the petals of the sun that rise
In a sky of darkness, a revelation

I swam across that river, with her
And with a divine pleasure binding us
Swirled in that hurricane together
Driven by a divine feeling behind us.

Comments about Love by cherassery damodaran binish

  • (1/11/2012 8:45:00 AM)

    Swirled in that hurricane together
    Driven by a divine feeling behind us
    beautiful lines
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  • Brianna Winebarger (1/10/2012 12:00:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful poem and is inspiring. you have a way with words (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2012 12:10:00 AM)

    So romantic and true to ones heart. It is rare, I believe, to find a true person with the full passion and idea of love. You, my friend, have shown us your heart of love. (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (1/4/2012 6:22:00 AM)

    really, , this one evoks true feelings in d reader
    grt poem
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  • Elizabeth Wesley (1/1/2012 8:54:00 PM)

    So much emotion, a feeling of abandon and very romantic. Your poem is lovely to read! :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    Love has been described in pen by many poets, known and unknown. Your LOVE is devinely re-defined through your own lines...A very well blended poem and mystically poetic. Continue your adventure towards writing....You are gifted! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2011 4:16:00 AM)

    great poem, kinda like a romantism poem, with your nature analogies (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 7:17:00 AM)

    'but it was for me, her eyes
    that revealed the truth of passion.'

    great poem my friend, ,10++++
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/12/2011 12:08:00 PM)

    (Love is divine) ...
    'tis a g'd poem, , I love this poem! ! ! ! 10++
    Plz read my poem(love and love at first sight)
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 12, 2011

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