Somebody told it was the color
Of her dress attracted him first
Then her looks, as the gist
Of the innocence and the valor
But it was for me, her eyes
That revealed the truth of passion
And as the petals of the sun that rise
In a sky of darkness, a revelation
I swam across that river, with her
And with a divine pleasure binding us
Swirled in that hurricane together
Driven by a divine feeling behind us.
'but it was for me, her eyes that revealed the truth of passion.' great poem my friend, ,10++++
great poem, kinda like a romantism poem, with your nature analogies
Love has been described in pen by many poets, known and unknown. Your LOVE is devinely re-defined through your own lines...A very well blended poem and mystically poetic. Continue your adventure towards writing....You are gifted! Thanks for sharing.
Swirled in that hurricane together Driven by a divine feeling behind us beautiful lines
this is a beautiful poem and is inspiring. you have a way with words
So romantic and true to ones heart. It is rare, I believe, to find a true person with the full passion and idea of love. You, my friend, have shown us your heart of love.
really, , this one evoks true feelings in d reader grt poem
So much emotion, a feeling of abandon and very romantic. Your poem is lovely to read! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(Love is divine) ... 'tis a g'd poem, , I love this poem! ! ! ! 10++ Plz read my poem(love and love at first sight)