cherassery damodaran binish

Time - Poem by cherassery damodaran binish

Time is flowing
Like a wagon moving
Flowers are falling
With a race, perishing
Faces are fading
Of the stars mourning
Trees are falling
When the birds singing
Man alone standing
With a greed never ending
Time is flowing......
When..., only the man existing.

Comments about Time by cherassery damodaran binish

  • (9/19/2012 12:21:00 PM)

    well rhymed, liked it (Report) Reply

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  • Kemi Kemms (9/11/2012 2:10:00 AM)

    Yes, time goes by really fast and we should focus more on the important things of our lives such as love, nature instead of material ones. A great idea for a poem! (Report) Reply

  • yellowbell alamanda (1/17/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    i love this one, short and thoughtful!
    keep it up.
    good luck and thanks for sharing it again :)
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  • Shahzia Batool (1/12/2012 6:28:00 AM)

    kon kehta he k haalaat badal jaen gey
    waqt guzray ga tou hum sath guzar jaen gey...i think man standing alone, or apart is an is not a separate being but the passing time casts it's effect on him indeed!
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  • (1/12/2012 12:59:00 AM)

    ur poems r gr8..u pot in them all kind of nice and full of soul some of them..but u must work litlle on ur englesh.r some mistakes were u can`t understand the meeneng of the word in that moment..i hope u not mad at me..i just sayng.and i cordiallly invite u to read my poems too and comment..pls. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (1/4/2012 8:53:00 AM)

    time lost will never be taken back
    so better be good and not greedy
    your idea speaks the truth
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  • Abhimanyu Kumar.s (1/4/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    liked your sense of flow. keep growing.10 lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 3:39:00 AM)

    this world z all in the hands of time! (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 10:34:00 AM)

    As the saying goes TIME IS GOLD. A beautiful poem to remind us that time is fleeting as the natue and the humankind. Never regret the fleeting time used in writing such a tasteful poem....Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    time is always flowing, well written, nice poem man! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/11/2011 11:04:00 AM)

    [Time is flowing]
    An excellent poem/well-penning! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 7, 2011

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