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Time

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Time is flowing
Like a wagon moving
Flowers are falling
With a race, perishing
Faces are fading
Of the stars mourning
Trees are falling
When the birds singing
Man alone standing
With a greed never ending

Time is flowing......
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 January 2012

time lost will never be taken back so better be good and not greedy your idea speaks the truth

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 04 January 2012

liked your sense of flow. keep growing.10 lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Indira Babbellapati 29 December 2011

this world z all in the hands of time!

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Virginia Pecho Gely 27 December 2011

As the saying goes TIME IS GOLD. A beautiful poem to remind us that time is fleeting as the natue and the humankind. Never regret the fleeting time used in writing such a tasteful poem....Thanks for sharing.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 December 2011

time is always flowing, well written, nice poem man!

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Full Moon 19 September 2012

well rhymed, liked it

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Kemi Kemms 11 September 2012

Yes, time goes by really fast and we should focus more on the important things of our lives such as love, nature instead of material ones. A great idea for a poem!

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yellowbell alamanda 17 January 2012

i love this one, short and thoughtful! keep it up. good luck and thanks for sharing it again :)

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Shahzia Batool 12 January 2012

kon kehta he k haalaat badal jaen gey waqt guzray ga tou hum sath guzar jaen gey...i think man standing alone, or apart is an illusion...man is not a separate being but the passing time casts it's effect on him indeed!

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Neagu Geta 12 January 2012

ur poems r gr8..u pot in them all kind of ideeas..love..nature..thinkings..is nice and full of soul some of them..but u must work litlle on ur englesh.r some mistakes were u can`t understand the meeneng of the word in that moment..i hope u not mad at me..i just sayng.and i cordiallly invite u to read my poems too and comment..pls.

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