Love hardly stays
especially these days
Love is so cold
Although it has flames
Have you heard the stories
That were told
always be a chicken
And never be bold
Don`t be a toy
Played in its games
Keep taking the bus
Instead of its five-star planes
Control your heart
Keep your emotions cooled
Don`t fall in love
Don`t be fooled
The ending is hah ha ha, let's cultivate Genetically Modified love and get lovely yield. Nice poem, love it.
WOW.......it's true love theres days is hard do find and its cold....but i truly hope u find true love soon
true love is beautifull... you will know when you find it.......
LOVE is for all....tts is want all of us want.to be love with the person whom care for us and love us with open heart.....Falling in love is not fool...its only falling in love with the person you think is really the one for you......
'Don`t fall in love Don`t be fooled ' what a great ending, well written and well expressed. So true. What do you think, fall in love with a chance that you might get hurt or not fall in love at all. I say the first option, don't hold back
I do not fully agree as I has a good example of myself and my love which our love will last forever till death I vowed though we are separated because of his studies for the time being but I will always regard him as my one and only love.
love this poem like when it says, Love hardly stays especially these days, so true
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well let me start of by saying that i sorta feel the same way Amazing poem it really gets you thinking about love :) Also thanks for commenting my poem I do have more and ill be sure keep on writing Again thanks for the comment i was actually nervous that people were going to hate it Lots of love Yasmine