Love? Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Love?

Rating: 3.9


Love hardly stays
especially these days
Love is so cold
Although it has flames
Have you heard the stories
That were told
always be a chicken
And never be bold
Don`t be a toy
Played in its games
Keep taking the bus
Instead of its five-star planes
Control your heart
Keep your emotions cooled
Don`t fall in love
Don`t be fooled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmine Torres 18 November 2008

well let me start of by saying that i sorta feel the same way Amazing poem it really gets you thinking about love :) Also thanks for commenting my poem I do have more and ill be sure keep on writing Again thanks for the comment i was actually nervous that people were going to hate it Lots of love Yasmine

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

The ending is hah ha ha, let's cultivate Genetically Modified love and get lovely yield. Nice poem, love it.

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Rudy Hossam 28 August 2008

WOW.......it's true love theres days is hard do find and its cold....but i truly hope u find true love soon

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Priyanka Shetty 23 July 2008

true love is beautifull... you will know when you find it.......

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LOVE is for all....tts is want all of us want.to be love with the person whom care for us and love us with open heart.....Falling in love is not fool...its only falling in love with the person you think is really the one for you......

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Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010

so true that it hurts

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 15 September 2009

'Don`t fall in love Don`t be fooled ' what a great ending, well written and well expressed. So true. What do you think, fall in love with a chance that you might get hurt or not fall in love at all. I say the first option, don't hold back

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Bushra Hussaini 11 September 2009

lil funny yet very much true...good job! !

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I do not fully agree as I has a good example of myself and my love which our love will last forever till death I vowed though we are separated because of his studies for the time being but I will always regard him as my one and only love.

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asma Jone 02 December 2008

love this poem like when it says, Love hardly stays especially these days, so true

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