Love`s Heat Poem by Tareq Jalabi
Love`s Heat
because of the heat of your love
my heart had melt
i knew not what`s happening
but i knew what i felt
i sensed it was meant to be
and it was fate
that brought u to me
on that specific date
i was the fish
and u were the bait
i knew i`ll be hurt
but i could`nt wait
i didn`t realize that
there was a catch
you can`t have an eagle`s egg
without getting a scratch
the consequence was that
for eternity i`ll be damned
to have the devil`s worst curse
that hatred for me banned
and to experience love
at first hand
or even worse
to control love and
snatchVenus`s purse
i really liked this i would say it is one of my favorites of yours... keep up the good work
wow, blue eyes it was great i love the rhyme in it, it's a 10 on my scale! ~ Love Hazel G.E
great concept of passion..nice write/ rhymes...great one..A10 Ency Bearis
Great write by u! Thanks for sharing. I am fine, only a bit held up by my work at this part of the year.warmest regards to u.
I like all your poems, but there's something special about this one...very well written
subdued in love...but the feelings there of strongly expressed...a good romantic piece to read...10
Wow, it seems ur experienced in the 'love' department....good job, and keep writing.
With all your love poems I say that you're a romantic guy in need of a perfect soul mate that understands you! I love your poems...very passionate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Rhythm, rhyme and a heartfelt message - well done! S :)