Love And Hate Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Love And Hate

Rating: 3.0


God knows why I can't read my own fate!
God knows why love has turned into hate!
God knows I have no more love to waste!
God knows why I am in wretched state!
God knows why we had no tête-à-tête!
God knows why I am not your playmate!
God knows you were like my heaven's gate!
God knows how you can now compensate!
God knows your love could make my life great!
But it seems it has become too late!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abel John 11 May 2012

This is a real deep piece of mind, really, God knows!

0 0 Reply
Sai Srujana 11 May 2012

Wow so sentenemental

0 0 Reply
Hans Vr 11 May 2012

A good wirte, Asif. I think indeed that God knows. For many things the reason is obvious, but so many things happen that we truly do not understand. Sometimes only years later we can appreciate why God had different plans for us than we desired in the moment. Excellent poem.

0 0 Reply
Free Bird 11 May 2012

just God know this: D nice write.it was written from heart: D

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 11 May 2012

A great write, God knows love, good poem.

0 0 Reply

THIS IS AGOOD JOB MY MAN ILIKE WHAT I READ..WELL DONE IT GIVE HOPE TO THE HOPLESS ONES

0 0 Reply
Jasbir Chatterjee 12 May 2012

this poem has a good rhyme pattern, but I don't think God can give you a solution if you can't find it within yourself...

0 0 Reply
Sanjay Mehta 12 May 2012

Simple, free flowing, but when HE is with you how can you be late? HIS plans are grand which we mortals have never been able to grasp.

0 0 Reply
Gerald Saidi 11 May 2012

This is a good poem especially for performance. It speaks out and wonderfully so

0 0 Reply
Daniel Warner 11 May 2012

God knows both love and hate alike.Very spirited very good write.Keep it up.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Close
Error Success