poet Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Love And Hate

God knows why I can't read my own fate!
God knows why love has turned into hate!
God knows I have no more love to waste!
God knows why I am in wretched state!
God knows why we had no tête-à-tête!
God knows why I am not your playmate!
God knows you were like my heaven's gate!
God knows how you can now compensate!
God knows your love could make my life great!
But it seems it has become too late!

Poem Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2012
Poem Edited: Friday, May 11, 2012

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  • Goodenough Sakhile(shotaromeo) DlaminiGoodenough Sakhile(shotaromeo) Dlamini (5/15/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    THIS IS AGOOD JOB MY MAN ILIKE WHAT I READ..WELL DONE IT GIVE HOPE TO THE HOPLESS ONES

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (5/12/2012 3:46:00 AM)

    this poem has a good rhyme pattern, but I don't think God can give you a solution if you can't find it within yourself...

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  • Sanjay MehtaSanjay Mehta (5/12/2012 12:24:00 AM)

    Simple, free flowing, but when HE is with you how can you be late? HIS plans are grand which we mortals have never been able to grasp.

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  • Gerald SaidiGerald Saidi (5/11/2012 1:38:00 PM)

    This is a good poem especially for performance. It speaks out and wonderfully so

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  • Daniel WarnerDaniel Warner (5/11/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    God knows both love and hate alike.Very spirited very good write.Keep it up.

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  • Louise Walker (5/11/2012 10:14:00 AM)

    Great poem I enjoyed it.

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  • Dave Walker (5/11/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    A great write, God knows love, good poem.

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  • Free BirdFree Bird (5/11/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    just God know this: D nice write.it was written from heart: D

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (5/11/2012 7:02:00 AM)

    A good wirte, Asif. I think indeed that God knows. For many things the reason is obvious, but so many things happen that we truly do not understand. Sometimes only years later we can appreciate why God had different plans for us than we desired in the moment.
    Excellent poem.

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  • Sai Srujana (5/11/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    Wow so sentenemental

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  • Abel John (5/11/2012 3:14:00 AM)

    This is a real deep piece of mind, really, God knows!

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