I walk along the shore
a faint whisper
I hear from ocean
waves calm after a
violent grimace
Sun dips its parched face
a profound decline
to ocean’s depth
I walk along the shore...
beneath moon beam and
thousands of stars...
and my mind a cistern
brims on hope....
no sorrows I borrowed
from life, no fears
I loaded from life
I walk alone....
tread on earth and night
to rise on a new dawn...
to gaze at a pleasant dawn..
from heaven's shore...
from night to day
I stride on... alone..
and I am at peace...
absolutely fantastic. this piece put me at peace. i love your work! ! so positive and uplifting...
… The loneliness and unity … is beautiful and is melodious … the reader with you ….10 …
It is interesting, how certain words we use sound like certain sounds. The words you used sound silent, calm, like a still ocean or tranquil sunrise. Though the sunrise doesn't make sound, I would think so, by reading your poem.
yet the colors razzling over the rungs of stance the whisper when impulses the blue........................yet genial bedecking by the metaphors ingeniously, soothing, wellpenned, thanks for sharing
what wonder the Lord thy God gives us.... a solitute of peace.... even Jesus.... utter the word peace......for the world have a different view of peace... your peace Rema is a peace of the solitute of our soul... thank you
Unusual similies and odd usages do not detract from the singularity of this piece; there is a mediative theme which binds it neatly together. Rgds, Ivan
Righteous life brings out right words thatt can correct this world. Fascinating piece.This poem has increased my respect towards you sathya narayana
there's none like one's own self as a companinon...feels good to read...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If only all of us could be taking this stroll with you and being at peace, one and all.