I walk along the shore
a faint whisper
I hear from ocean
waves calm after a
violent grimace
Sun dips its parched face
a profound decline
to ocean’s depth
I walk along the shore...
beneath moon beam and
thousands of stars...
and my mind a cistern
brims on hope....
no sorrows I borrowed
from life, no fears
I loaded from life
I walk alone....
tread on earth and night
to rise on a new dawn...
to gaze at a pleasant dawn..
from heaven's shore...
from night to day
I stride on... alone..
and I am at peace...
It is a gift that we can experience peace in such a world fill with turmoil and hatred. This gift God gives to even the ones who hate him. Thank you, with respect. Jeannie. You write well.....
a lovely soothing poem. i too feel most at peace whenever i am in natural sorroundings. its like meditation. thanks for sharing such a fine poem.10 mamta
what wonder the Lord thy God gives us.... a solitute of peace.... even Jesus.... utter the word peace......for the world have a different view of peace... your peace Rema is a peace of the solitute of our soul... thank you
Unusual similies and odd usages do not detract from the singularity of this piece; there is a mediative theme which binds it neatly together. Rgds, Ivan
Righteous life brings out right words thatt can correct this world. Fascinating piece.This poem has increased my respect towards you sathya narayana
there's none like one's own self as a companinon...feels good to read...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is something peaceful about the sea, and walking along the shore, a lovely poem that brings peace to the reader, Best wishes Lynda xx