*** Love Or Lust *** Comments

I have attempted to write about, however it is a that drives to something un-expected.

I walk in pain As needles climb up my feet My lungs shiver of dryness My heart pumps like a drum beat Somewhere under the canopy Of the velvet sky A woman in tan Waving to me To join her party Dig and cover A gravely game great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

i like balls and shaft

You express yourself clearly

Amber and Raymichelle are right on target. All i can add is thank you for sharing this insightful poem. :)

I enjoyed reading the struggles and conflicts in your words. Really great!

I love your last remark - love cannot fly on a single wing.

Amber is extremely correct!

Your poem hit it right on but I definiatly loved the words in your PS Thanks for sharing

Interesting. Very nice though. P.s. The heart is the only thing that feels. The mind is simply what keeps us from acting on every tiny emotion.

i like the choice of words in this poem. They seem separate but they are all connected, they show your chain of thought at the time.Where did you write this poem it seems like you wrote it outside or something? P.S the heart is where we feel the mind is where we reason...

i loved your poem its like so amazing the tone in your writing is perfect. And that is true it takes two to tango and love can't fly with one wing! ! ! ! ! !

So true, it sure can die, depending on how much love one receives...and cannot fly with one wing.well said... :)

Hi Sulaiman, I worshipped yr mind... i wonder that u had touch that deep. In fact that is the longest & complicated PS i ever read. Tks for sharing this great piece :)

this is so true. very touching. thank you

thats right i like alot that whole poem is really senseable

Yes sulaiman totally agree with you.. Lust make love more stronger... +10

very impressive, I like the raw emotional feel I get from reading it, very well done

It's such a great piece. The title is good ;) Your poems are always great & it's such a pleasure to read them...

good job this was wonderful.. the first on i read that cought my eye.. the title is eye chatching so there youu have it i love it!