Love's Abracadabra Comments

Woooo I love it. Nice and deep poem

Wow! How well on the wings of imagination! I wish you get your love like a Love.

It is a good piece of poem. surprised coz abracadabra is a Jewish religious charm to heal Malaria as mentioned in encyclopedias !

Talk of creative writing this one really good the imagery of the lover(magician) the deadly snake pet being tamed. The persona must be very loving.

Really a wonderful poetry, it really unique you know..i am sorry for late respond as i told you before, i am not much reading lately...blurry eyes, headache, mind wandering, and time less in hand, but i managed to get some read of your poem..i know you always doing a very nice poem like always..like this one_Soul

'She has become as good as a pet cow'. I'm sure that's a line that works beautifuly in Bangladesh, Asif. I must try it out in Melbourne. Very Immaginative. Keep up the goodwork

excellent Asif, keep it up. Cheers Jerry

U have the magic man u have the soul-gan so u are the king man

superb! ! the last lines are really wonderful...keep on writing »so close«

i am in agreement with dr. sayed this is good fr child...

Me also like that ryms. Really good.

great rythm, great magical fairytale, hats off to you mace!

So original in a spellbinding rhythm and imagery, loved it! !

This is short and sweet. I love the rhythm. Pls keep writting.

A great combination of thought and poetic skill.

Nice one. Can be popular in children section. Sweet.

A very cute and melodious peice, i liked the tone of the poem, good work. Thanks for sharing