Sandra Feldman

Love's Confessions - Poem by Sandra Feldman

When you're not around,
No moon, no stars
Are to be found.

When you're not around,
Every thing is still,
No thrill,
Is to be found.

But, when you suddenly appear!
The air is crisp and clear,
The sky is blue with cheer
And I, I am alive
Once more,
Without you,
I am but a shadow
Of what was life
In me, before.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Love's Confessions by Sandra Feldman

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (2/16/2019 9:32:00 AM)

    This is poetry sublimest, dear Sandra. Love is the cause of all precious things. At the touch of love, we feel mentally healthy again. Sublimest poem at the finest. I have enjoyed very much your unique poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (2/14/2019 1:34:00 AM)

    If one can fall in love with a poem, this verse is that poem. Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rae Seagull (2/12/2019 10:30:00 AM)

    Love this poem, Sandra! Exquisite...10 (Report) Reply

  • Aqua Flower (2/12/2019 5:29:00 AM)

    Love makes us come alive! I am sure everyone feels this way. Using the shadow to describe how one feels when a loved one is not a great way to express this. Well-crafted and penned and the ending definitely makes the poem powerful! (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2019 5:21:00 AM)

    how beautifully you penned it Sandra! 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (2/12/2019 4:37:00 AM)

    O dear
    O love
    if you're not around me
    nothing is around me
    I'm as like as inert things

    if you're stay my around
    everything is around me

    You're my motion
    you're my veins
    you're my blo0d circulation....................
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2019

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