Love Speaks Poem by Molay Toufik

I enjoyed your poem, but to parts confused me, is it a error or am i just misunderstanding what you wrote? I breed you every day breed? When you smile, impossible to head it I Dont understand the 2nd part of this line. Other than tht luv it: D

a sweet poem! ! I lke romantic poems like this one! ! Top marks! ! !

'tis a wonderful romantic poem, so sweet and emotional! ! ! Top marks! !

great expression. feelings are hard to express so keep trying, ric

Hi Molay, in the 5th line did you meanneed you every day instead of breed.. I felt that it was an error. In the second verse you have show it in the first line and I think know it would give you a better ryhme in the second. Also, the very last word I think you mean any instead of eny. Otherwise it has a sweet emotional feel to it and something to say. Hope this has been of some help. Obviously you enjoy writing and if you read the old masters of poetry you will find their writing most helpful Good luck, you have lots of potential, hope I've been some help and you don't feel hurt.

Your love poem is good, keep it up.

Evocative art in truth love and more work...

I immensely enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good write. The rhyming scheme added a certain flair to the poem. I will enjoy reading more.

Pretty good. It would definitely make your poem alot better if you studied English more. That would make it a lot easier to read and understand, and make it alot better overall. Hope you find it helpful.

nice rhyming, i enjoyed reading this