Love That Fled Poem by kanav justa

Love That Fled

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever tried to hear the mighty ocean cry
not by the ears but from the wisdom in your eye

the ocean sometimes calm sometimes not
but what if like human heart it begins to rot

the sun if frozen, berefts you of the rays
and your heart old, not recall the pleasant old days

what if the cold sun, forever sets at west
or a starving young child, never meet his mother's breast

if the mountain starts to grow beneath the barren land
or if some child's ache, her mother never understand

if the freezing night gets, too cold for you to sleep
would you then think of, the promises you did'nt keep

would you go where you going, or for once would you turn
to know how it hurts, never to be loved back in return

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 November 2013

Unreciprocated love in whatever shade it may be, is painful! Enjoyed these rhyming lines! !

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Dinesan Madathil 27 November 2013

Hypothetical concerns rendered with poetic justice. A little editing is solicited yet.. Again a brilliant write from the imagination of Kanav Justa..

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Ken E Hall 28 November 2013

feeelings in the poem make the reader look back on their lives Love that Fled thought provoking poem...regards

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 December 2013

Beautiful poem with deep meaning. It really hurts, never to be loved back in return. Each lines you have portrayed it very well. Loved it.

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Dee Corpolongo 01 December 2013

This is a very well written, straight to the heart poem...and the importance of what really matters in this life. Thank you for this....and may the world truly see, what is and what can be.

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2013

Great questions of what ifs... that we all need to know the answers to. Well done

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Kavya . 28 November 2013

v nice lines...loved reading every line especially what if the cold sun, forever sets at west or a starving young child, never meet his mother's breast a 10/10 from me

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 November 2013

Wow the ending theme explains the poem in the art n lyrical creative impressive style for the jilted feel. I admire d dramatic show of d lovesick tinge expression throughout. Kudos.

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