Love, Unseen Poem by Subrat Pradhan

Love, Unseen

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Mother feeds her baby with her milk
Soldier gives away his life for his countrymen
Father earns money for his family
Flower is plucked to be offered to God
One forsakes one's love for another
The sun gives away all its energy
The moon shine in the sky defining beauty
The tree bears fruit every year
The flower emits its aroma as a duty
The cloud carries water from the far away sea
The seasons come one after another
Everybody is busy in putting nails in coffin
Alas! very few understands the love unseen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Supriya Prathapan 22 July 2012

Love is indeed all about giving. Beautiful.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 August 2018

Love unseen, a lovely poem well writ

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2018

The cloud carries water from the far away sea The seasons come one after another Everybody is busy in putting nails in coffin Alas! very few understands the love unseen.....yes very true...... love unseen, only very few understand it....... from loving hearts which are pure and selfless love unseen proceeds.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Robin Bennett 23 July 2012

I'm so glad you sent me a message and turned me on to your poetry! This is so very good! I just love the format! The way you took so many different people or things and poetically explained there place in the world. The language was so well chosen. A lovely uplifting piece. I will be reading many more!

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Valerie Dohren 23 July 2012

Unseen love beautifully expressed here - very well penned.

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Roong S 23 July 2012

Some unseen love beautifully expressed here!

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