Crimson Love

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Loves A Lie - Poem by Crimson Love

Loves a lie,
that tricks us
into thinking its true,

Never alive,
yet never dead,
never ready to end,
yet not willing to begin,

Love like hate,
starts from within,
surface scars,
are the wounds of emotion.

we feel exempt,
to the hurt and pain,
when in reality,
we remain open,
for the hope,
that one day,
love won't hurt us again.

Comments about Loves A Lie by Crimson Love

  • (12/3/2011 3:20:00 AM)

    Dearest poetess i agree with you out-rightly yes though love gives us life hope and sop but yet it stings like scorpion leaving us in the life of dismay in May.... Awesome!

    'Never alive,
    yet never dead,
    never ready to end,
    yet not willing to begin, '

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the form of impressive poetry... If i got to grade this poem A1 is the only comment.....10+++++
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  • Romeo Della Valle (12/1/2011 7:11:00 PM)

    Love is like the Rainbow, multicolor and manifesting itself in different ways in our lives! Definitely, love is a two-way street we all must go through! This is a very touching write that clearly shows your emotions and talent! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! (Report) Reply

  • Neko Girl (12/1/2011 11:13:00 AM)

    That is so frekin true Crimson i love your poetry ur the best and i love you so much you are a great friend lol love is always out to get us no matter wht we try to do to get away from it it always comes bnack to hurt us (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    Amazingly true....beautiful write has touched my soul. You capture the truth of love that is for so many...blessings (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 1, 2011

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