Lowest Point Poem by Vidi Writes
Lowest Point
Vulnerability sets in
Winter cold rubs in
Silver lines drove
Swathe rich and poor
Arid breeze staples rudder
Cataclysm brow
Amnesia crunch
Nippy season ankles rust
Languished move
Seclusion sarcastic
Frost Bite throat clot
Survival in awe
Universal symptoms
Arctic zone inevitable
Implore supreme, demise as bestow
Vidi
27/10/2009
A visually powerful treat for the Minds-Eye, young lady...Your choice of short-cropt linage and language which carries a semi-lexic tone, is both impacting & abstractively pleasing to this Readers literary yen....Very Fine Work, indeed, Vidi! F j R
Climatic change and inclemency Weak and vulnerable Reason-Arctic zone....well said.... thanks.. And thanks for your comment on Aurobindo also
arctic zone inevitable- how true. lowest point, a longest distance in life... good metaphorical write Vidi. Mamta
old age hardships...both to body and mind...a helpless 'winter acceptance'! good use of metaphors Vidi...bit enigmatic though...thanks...10
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4/25/2024 11:47:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice work of the right season, the greyness and cool of winter may changed our thought of shapes, feel the nice from the agony, while drawing away, the unknown destination....10++