Luscious Guy Poem by Ernestine Northover

Luscious Guy

Rating: 5.0


Branches reaching to the sky,
'climb up' says I,
up high,
where I can spy
that luscious guy
who's caught my eye.

He is nearby
but he's kind of shy,
perhaps a smile is worth a try.

Oh My!
I can't deny
he could add stimuli
and he's very spry.

I'm pretty sure that he could electrify, or even petrify,
but he would very certainly, satisfy.

He'd be my sweetie pie,
if I could only occupy
his personae.

Oh Gosh! I shouldn't pry.
should I!

I think I'll say goodbye!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 08 October 2006

Almost caught there Ernestine, but lets face it, who apart from Anthony would be good enough for someone as caring as you? Take care my friend Love duncan X

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Raymond Wright 08 October 2006

What a great poem, You have captured infatuation and yearning while keeping it light and humorous... I really like it! ~ Ray

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Patricia Gale 08 October 2006

A delightful read with splendid rhyme!

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Andrew Blakemore 29 July 2008

Have you been spying on me again Ernestine? Lovely poem, Andrew xxx

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Melvina Germain 10 June 2007

An excellent write Ernestine, I truly enjoyed the read. As Frank said a light-hearted piece. Love it Ernestine--Melvina--

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 October 2006

ENJOYABLE, LIGHT-HEARTED PIECE....A SOLID WRITE, YOUNG LADY''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Melanie Emiko 08 October 2006

I had fun time reading. A teaser.

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Joseph Daly 08 October 2006

A very witty and jaunty poem Enestine. I love the use of 'personae'.

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