M@ke Your $p@rk! ! ! ! Poem by tanvi damle

M@ke Your $p@rk! ! ! !

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Don't say you're not important, it simply isn't true,
The fact that you were born, is proof that God has a plan for you.
Live your life not because you need to but because you want to,
For once don't think of others think of you.
Make it work, make it go,
Make it a yes instead of no.
You don't have to listen to what others say,
Live your dreams before they fade away.
For once forget all your worries & pain,
& like a child go and dance in the rain.
Make some music, make some noise,
Make a list of simple joys.
Let your heart free, let it dance & sing,
don't be afraid of anything.
Go & do what your heart says is right,
So that you can sleep without any regrets every night.
Make some cookies, make some tea,
Make a date with destiny.
Don't ever get scared to shine in the dark,
Don't give up untill you've reached your mark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

Yes Tanvi, we need the spark to ignite our engine of life.Good writes bro.

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

there are many metaphores in this poem i like it a lot.

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Andrew Rose 25 December 2008

thats is agreat poem there is some really awesome lines in there, and i love the message, if you write everything like this your doing well =)

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Yaseen Anwer 25 December 2008

Being a poet u must feel proud with this piece of work keep writting

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A very moving motivational poem. keep writing.

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

another great poem from tanvi, this one makes me feel good!

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Kallie Madison 15 January 2009

its great! ! i love it! its great, thats so true and god put on this earth for a reason and you put that into your poem!

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May Namoc 05 January 2009

ooh, Tanvi. bravo. i loved it, very motivational and oh so flowy. great job.

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Libbie Jones 05 January 2009

Tanvi I absolutely loved it! It was as if you knew what i was going through I wish my words flew across the page like that.. if only, if only Thank you Dear

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Indira Babbellapati 31 December 2008

.......motivating, tanvi!

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