If you want to win or go astray
You are just made for the USA
Too much right too much freedom
All are kings in that kingdom
Too much work too much fun
Like the hard working sun
Too much might too much money
The USA my honey
Wow! great idea! Simple but beautiful.Short but meaningful.Style is powerful with essential rhymes.I love this.
Powerful thoughts about the perceived failings of the national character of the USA. Please keep writing to raise awareness (especially in the USA) .
So great..you can compose well about the love on the country...short but really concise poem..I appreciate this one!
I read this with an air of irony in your voice- if i am right then yes. Ambiguous but good because of it like the USA I suppose
Good point I Fail to see, all I know the USA is made up of millions of migrants that chose to live there every nation on the planet lives there together as one...thanks for the invite...regards
What is the poet's stand? Is this a commentary or is the poet favoring USA in spite of the given odds? I think all nations have the positive and the negative sides, the natural and normal ways and the excesses.
USA is bound to come to pay back on his own coin.World economy is looking to China and India.Without them-USA is like a tissue paper used in toilets.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hei i loved it.simple with strong thoughts.