Magic Of Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Magic Of Love

Rating: 5.0


The poor laborer living in a hut,
sleeping on a mattress purchased
from a market of used things
and has been attempting to save him
from cold wave by an old blanket, .
But he always failed to fight the cold weather.
Often he could not go to the mill for working
and was warned many times
for his uninformed absence from his duty.
He never got complete wages for the month,
in the winter season.
The blanket was small for his requirement,
and he remained sick.
But then he fell in love,
and when his beloved
came to live with him,
the deficient blanket became efficient.
Since then he is prompt on his duty
even in cold waves,
and for the first time in his carrier
he was awarded attendance allowance
and full wages for the month.
How happy he was to purchase
a new sweater for his beloved wife!

Wednesday, November 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dipankar Sadhukhan 23 November 2016

A well crafted write. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2016

Awwwww....life can be so hard but it never cant change some sweet heart....it always good to know that, wonderful write of a beautiful story :)

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Abhilasha Bhatt 23 November 2016

Reminds me of the creation by great legendary author Munshi premchandji poos ki raat....amazing poem sir....thank you for sharing...loved it :)

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2016

Yes, magic of love can take away all pain.A beautiful write, thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 27 November 2016

I never knew that love could turn winter into spring......! (Just teasing) Yes, love can work wonders....! The warmth of love shields one from all biting chill! Enjoyed this humorous write!

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Mithilesh Yadav 24 November 2016

loved it babajaan..... aapkey ek ek shabd mein mohabbat hai....... thank you for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2016

Oh! What a heartfelt poem this is. I feel it as a magic of love. Excellent sir....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 November 2016

Akhtar Sahab! Magic of love, indeed! Deeply emotional and touching! Loved this poem. Surely, a full score!

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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2016

Unmatched, unparallel the magic of love well explained Janab....10

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