Many Wonders Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Many Wonders

Rating: 5.0

The planets do their dance around the sun;
their moons revolve around the planets, too.
I can't imagine how this thing is done;
it just seems too unlikely to be true.

A butterfly begins life as an egg,
then caterpillar, pupa or cocoon.
A frog begins his life without a leg,
but then begins to grow them rather soon.

The trees, the flowers, animals and birds
all make this world so beautiful to see,
and mountains, just too wonderful for words;
they thrill my mind and fill my soul with glee!

Of all these many wonders I am awed;
how can some people think there is no God?

Tuesday, January 23, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,butterfly,frog,mountains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem took Second Place in Contest # 40 of the 2023 NFSPS (National Federation of State Poetry Societies) contests. There were 98 entries.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

TOP Marks and myriad more, encore! TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2024

This amazing gorgeous poem may for me gets The First Place, Kim, such an excellent Sonnet, you have surpassed the Classic poet WS, true phenomenally rhymed and it has keen rhythm

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 February 2024

Congratulations on your outstanding achievement!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 February 2024

Such a beautiful poem, and so deserving of recognition! Memorable and deep.

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Smoky Hoss 28 January 2024

Beautiful, stunning actually. I agree.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2024

Exactly, how can some people think there is no God? A fabulous poem....loved it.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 January 2024

Congrats on the win I can see why Bravo! ! ! !

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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