Your melancholy baby
whispers under the moon...save me!
and under the stars she crys
constantly wondering why?
let her thoughts float away
giving her a brighter day
your melancholy baby
needs more gravy
come be her smile again
and make her melancholy end
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I see a melancholy little girl who is there within your being, but and every reader who still survives in you, in us... and this comes with a hugely well-balanced, poetic expression... dr. riza
your melancholy baby needs more gravy come be her smile again and make her melancholy end.........touching expression with deep emotion. A beautiful poem on love and sadness shared amazingly.10
Aqua Flower. Wonderfully expressed from the heart of poetry.+++10 Robert
The heart a poetry is always in our thoughts. thank you for always expressing your heart and thoughts and your comments as well on my poems.
This is quite good- - Paints an accurate picture of her state, and it RHYMES, too! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the opening two lines, you have captured the feeling so well with these words: Your melancholy baby whispers under the moon...save me!