Melancholy Baby Poem by Aqua Flower

Melancholy Baby

Rating: 5.0


Your melancholy baby
whispers under the moon...save me!
and under the stars she crys
constantly wondering why?
let her thoughts float away
giving her a brighter day
your melancholy baby
needs more gravy
come be her smile again
and make her melancholy end

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Wednesday, July 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely,love,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 18 July 2018

I like the opening two lines, you have captured the feeling so well with these words: Your melancholy baby whispers under the moon...save me!

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Rini Shibu 18 July 2018

Let her melancholy end.. Nice poem

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Riza Braholli 20 July 2018

I see a melancholy little girl who is there within your being, but and every reader who still survives in you, in us... and this comes with a hugely well-balanced, poetic expression... dr. riza

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Aqua Flower 21 July 2018

Thank you! An interesting comment.. glad you like the poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

your melancholy baby needs more gravy come be her smile again and make her melancholy end.........touching expression with deep emotion. A beautiful poem on love and sadness shared amazingly.10

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

So nice of a comment! Thank you for reading melancholy baby :)

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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

Aqua Flower. Wonderfully expressed from the heart of poetry.+++10 Robert

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Aqua Flower 21 July 2018

The heart a poetry is always in our thoughts. thank you for always expressing your heart and thoughts and your comments as well on my poems.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 July 2018

Such a moving poem👍👍👍

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Practicing Poetess 18 July 2018

This is quite good- - Paints an accurate picture of her state, and it RHYMES, too! :)

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