Mellow Rain Poem by Elena Sandu

Mellow Rain

Rating: 4.9


grains of love


with overflowing beauty!

The love disturbing soul,

will be allowed to random throw

lyrics sparkling with drops, shining

so much that totally forgot

of being pinned inside a tree

for long coveted chance:

the sun to hold

with my own


Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 April 2013

So softly you lifted and carefully you dropped keeping all its beauty....very nice poem, thank to read and share

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Valsa George 05 May 2013

I am drenched in this drizzle of love! Softly and delicately showered! !

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David Wood 07 May 2013

A lovely soft and gentle poem that totally relaxed me when I read it. Thanks.

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Patricia Grantham 10 May 2013

A lovely poem about raindrops! Each drop of rain that falls touches ones soul. The beauty of it all. Truly enjoyed it.

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Adeline Foster 20 May 2013

Yes a very nice poem. Please read mine - Rain - Adeline

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

With overflowing beauty soft grains of love are gifted as grace of rain by God. Random lyrics are allowed in mind due to presence of love in mind. Being pinned inside a tree holds reflection of rays of sun. A great imagery of love is drawn in this poem is very nice really...10

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Allotey Abossey 09 June 2015

When I see a beautiful poem I know this is a beautiful poem. I love this

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Kevin Patrick 17 September 2014

If poetry is a soothing sea of words, this is a beautiful day on the Mediterranean. The power of love flows through your words. Sadly for cynics

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

You softly lifted this poem its your style Serene Style and serene too

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Danny Draper 15 June 2013

I fine piece of delicately measured language. The rain and sun to a tree are indeed like love flowing as blood to a gifted kiss.

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