Midnight Rider Poem by shiny shine

Midnight Rider

Rating: 5.0


As I wonder through the trees
I hear a softly calling breeze
Come to me, come to me, it pleas
Weakly wondering, with all my might
I stumble upon a most terrifying sight
Come to me, come to me, it pleas
Reaching out with its fingers of death
it beackons me and leaves out its breath
Trembling from head to toe suddenly I seem to know
The demand that stands before me in the snow
this creature that beckons and pleads with me so
staring into its blackened eyes I see through its well dressed disguse
for now i see with my own eyes my evil twin whom I despise
singing, tenderly, cime to me, come to me, it pleas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Montalvo 17 May 2009

This poem is really good, and I love the title so much,10/10

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James Mclain 23 April 2009

I appreciate this morbid kind of thinking at least you have what it takes to spread your wealth...iip thanks you...

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Arabian Heart 20 August 2008

an evils side in which most have to deal with pleading to lead you astray which path shall you choose or will it plead you away a poem of light and dark write another for me

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2008

Stunning write, shiny. I loved the flowing imagery, and your lyrics..well what can I say but Bravo! ! ! ! outstanding writer...10+ best wishes Jon.

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very well done! i give it a 20! lol keep up the good work

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Anonymous Heart 01 March 2010

Pretty creepy, but an amazing poem.

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Darlene Styles 12 February 2010

very creepy, but good write

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Carol Gall 28 July 2009

great poem shiny nice and eerie

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Dave Dunn, aka Rhumour 20 July 2009

I rather like the way you eased into the darkness Shiny - really effective and well thought through. :) Best wishes

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Angelic Warrior 09 July 2009

creepy...but amazing.....i like it :)

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