Mitigation Poem by Adeline Foster

Mitigation

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Mitigation

As we plow the rows of life,
The twisted furrows of our strife-
We must look back a time or two
To see if they are following true.
To know the turning of the share
And shed a cleansing, woe-filled tear,
For, ever as we try to prove
The straightest line, our steps will swerve.
Yet if we contemplate too long
The cause and where we have gone wrong,
We'll miss the guide lines up ahead
And once again off course be led.

We cannot watch the ruts behind
And hope to straighten out the line.

But when each night our work is through
And we must rest as all men do,
We must gaze out across the field,
Survey the fruit our labors yield.
The knowledge of a job complete
Will see a field of golden wheat
Where now the furrows march apace,
The flaws now hidden in the haze
Of distance from the cabin door.

Friday, September 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: pastoral
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the book Storm Song by Adeline Foster
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 15 September 2012

A great simplicity, yet great depth. You are a marvel, for any age. I really enjoy and appreciate your well penned writings. Just keep on. Much was told in those first two lines

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Autumn Winds 27 September 2012

I love this poem! ! Everything moves and sways even if we don't want it too

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Hazel Durham 29 September 2012

A great poem full of insight and depth, so original and thought provoking! I loved this poem!

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Babatunde Aremu 19 November 2012

Great poem written from deep insight and experience

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Heather Wilson 10 February 2013

, We cannot watch the ruts behind, flaws appear althrough our lives, many thankfully are forgotten or remembered in a haze over time, Thank you for the invite to read. very much enjoyed.

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Bill Cantrell 22 April 2014

Oh, the last line is awesome, I hope one day to write like this.

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V P Mahur 26 March 2014

Dear Madam, This one is really nice poem with peaceful thoughts. I liked it very much. Thanks for your encouragement and comments on my poem. Please keep your blessings with me. May God grant you perfect health.

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Rajesh Thankappan 25 March 2014

An excellent poem. On reading it I am reminded of the adage ' As you sow so you reap.' With every that we put forth we also have to assess the foot we planted earlier.

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Heather Wilkins 08 July 2013

your last stanza is excellent My favorite. great writing you are very talented writer

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Mark Sauer 27 February 2013

Very nice indeed. Simple and beautiful.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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